No, I don't mean leave the dirty dishes on your room-mate's bed every time they bake and don't clean up after themselves.
I mean be passive-aggressive, as in get rid of the passive tone in your writing. Aggressively.
How?
Turf "was" every chance you get.
Its hard to do since you can't erase "was" and still have a coherent sentence. There is rarely a single word substitution, but a little elbow grease never hurt anyone.
Until this morning, this is all I knew: Don't overuse "was." This blog post by Celia Yeary made it clear WHY. I recommend you check it out.
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